[go] please proof November07 newsletter

[Rama Balakrishnan]

Newsletter looks very good. Nice job.

I have couple of suggestions (take or leave)-


Section on Cardiovascular Physiology..
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1) Change first sentence to-

Two large-scale addition *of GO terms* were made in October 2007...

Was the addition to all 3 ontologies or only F and P? If latter, may  
be we can even say-

Two large-scale addition of GO terms to the Molecular function and  
Biological process ontolgies were made...

2) Change the sentence about using AmiGO to:

To see the blood pressure regulation...use the AmiGO Advanced Search;  
**type mtg_cardio or mtg_muscle in the text box on the top and select  
'All fields' in the 'Search Type' section.**

Section on spsl2go
----------------------------
Last sentence of first para-should it be 'coded' in (IEA coded)? can  
it be changed to '...electronic GO annotation (using IEA evidence  
code) in our latest...'

Thats all.

Thanks,

Rama

On Nov 14, 2007, at 1:30 PM, Stacia Engel wrote:

> Hi,
>
> Thanks everyone for input on the November 2007 issue of the GO  
> newsletter.  We have a version that is ready for proofing by GOC  
> members.  Please have a look and let us know if we have any errors,  
> typos, etc.  We'd like to send it out by week's end.
>
> Thanks,
> Stacia & the Newsletter Team
>
> pdf -
> http://www.yeastgenome.org/~stacia/GOnewsletterNovember07.pdf
>
> html -
> http://www.geneontology.org/test-html.shtml
>
>