[go] please proof November07 newsletter

[David Hill]

Hi Rama,

The cardio and muscle terms were only added to process.

David

Rama Balakrishnan wrote:
> Newsletter looks very good. Nice job.
>
> I have couple of suggestions (take or leave)-
>
>
> Section on Cardiovascular Physiology..
> -------------------------------------
> 1) Change first sentence to-
>
> Two large-scale addition *of GO terms* were made in October 2007...
>
> Was the addition to all 3 ontologies or only F and P? If latter, may 
> be we can even say-
>
> Two large-scale addition of GO terms to the Molecular function and 
> Biological process ontolgies were made...
>
> 2) Change the sentence about using AmiGO to:
>
> To see the blood pressure regulation...use the AmiGO Advanced Search; 
> **type mtg_cardio or mtg_muscle in the text box on the top and select 
> 'All fields' in the 'Search Type' section.**
>
> Section on spsl2go
> ----------------------------
> Last sentence of first para-should it be 'coded' in (IEA coded)? can 
> it be changed to '...electronic GO annotation (using IEA evidence 
> code) in our latest...'
>
> Thats all.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Rama
>
> On Nov 14, 2007, at 1:30 PM, Stacia Engel wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> Thanks everyone for input on the November 2007 issue of the GO 
>> newsletter.  We have a version that is ready for proofing by GOC 
>> members.  Please have a look and let us know if we have any errors, 
>> typos, etc.  We'd like to send it out by week's end.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Stacia & the Newsletter Team
>>
>> pdf -
>> http://www.yeastgenome.org/~stacia/GOnewsletterNovember07.pdf
>>
>> html -
>> http://www.geneontology.org/test-html.shtml
>>
>>
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