[go] please proof November07 newsletter

[Rama Balakrishnan]

Thanks David. In that case, may be the sentence can be changed to just-

Two large-scale addition of GO terms to the Biological process  
ontology was made.....

Rama



On Nov 14, 2007, at 1:57 PM, David Hill wrote:

> Hi Rama,
>
> The cardio and muscle terms were only added to process.
>
> David
>
> Rama Balakrishnan wrote:
>> Newsletter looks very good. Nice job.
>>
>> I have couple of suggestions (take or leave)-
>>
>>
>> Section on Cardiovascular Physiology..
>> -------------------------------------
>> 1) Change first sentence to-
>>
>> Two large-scale addition *of GO terms* were made in October 2007...
>>
>> Was the addition to all 3 ontologies or only F and P? If latter,  
>> may be we can even say-
>>
>>>> Two large-scale addition of GO terms to the Molecular function  
>>>> and Biological process ontolgies were made...
>>
>>
>> 2) Change the sentence about using AmiGO to:
>>
>> To see the blood pressure regulation...use the AmiGO Advanced  
>> Search; **type mtg_cardio or mtg_muscle in the text box on the top  
>> and select 'All fields' in the 'Search Type' section.**
>>
>> Section on spsl2go
>> ----------------------------
>> Last sentence of first para-should it be 'coded' in (IEA coded)?  
>> can it be changed to '...electronic GO annotation (using IEA  
>> evidence code) in our latest...'
>>
>> Thats all.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Rama
>>
>> On Nov 14, 2007, at 1:30 PM, Stacia Engel wrote:
>>
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> Thanks everyone for input on the November 2007 issue of the GO  
>>> newsletter.  We have a version that is ready for proofing by GOC  
>>> members.  Please have a look and let us know if we have any  
>>> errors, typos, etc.  We'd like to send it out by week's end.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>> Stacia & the Newsletter Team
>>>
>>> pdf -
>>> http://www.yeastgenome.org/~stacia/GOnewsletterNovember07.pdf
>>>
>>> html -
>>> http://www.geneontology.org/test-html.shtml
>>>
>>>
>>