[go] please proof November07 newsletter

[Stacia Engel]

hi Rama,
thanks for your feedback.  i have incorporated your edits.

stacia

On Nov 14, 2007, at 2:00 PM, Rama Balakrishnan wrote:

> Thanks David. In that case, may be the sentence can be changed to  
> just-
>
> Two large-scale addition of GO terms to the Biological process  
> ontology was made.....
>
> Rama
>
>
>
> On Nov 14, 2007, at 1:57 PM, David Hill wrote:
>
>> Hi Rama,
>>
>> The cardio and muscle terms were only added to process.
>>
>> David
>>
>> Rama Balakrishnan wrote:
>>> Newsletter looks very good. Nice job.
>>>
>>> I have couple of suggestions (take or leave)-
>>>
>>>
>>> Section on Cardiovascular Physiology..
>>> -------------------------------------
>>> 1) Change first sentence to-
>>>
>>> Two large-scale addition *of GO terms* were made in October 2007...
>>>
>>> Was the addition to all 3 ontologies or only F and P? If latter,  
>>> may be we can even say-
>>>
>>>>> Two large-scale addition of GO terms to the Molecular function  
>>>>> and Biological process ontolgies were made...
>>>
>>>
>>> 2) Change the sentence about using AmiGO to:
>>>
>>> To see the blood pressure regulation...use the AmiGO Advanced  
>>> Search; **type mtg_cardio or mtg_muscle in the text box on the  
>>> top and select 'All fields' in the 'Search Type' section.**
>>>
>>> Section on spsl2go
>>> ----------------------------
>>> Last sentence of first para-should it be 'coded' in (IEA coded)?  
>>> can it be changed to '...electronic GO annotation (using IEA  
>>> evidence code) in our latest...'
>>>
>>> Thats all.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>>
>>> Rama
>>>
>>> On Nov 14, 2007, at 1:30 PM, Stacia Engel wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hi,
>>>>
>>>> Thanks everyone for input on the November 2007 issue of the GO  
>>>> newsletter.  We have a version that is ready for proofing by GOC  
>>>> members.  Please have a look and let us know if we have any  
>>>> errors, typos, etc.  We'd like to send it out by week's end.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> Stacia & the Newsletter Team
>>>>
>>>> pdf -
>>>> http://www.yeastgenome.org/~stacia/GOnewsletterNovember07.pdf
>>>>
>>>> html -
>>>> http://www.geneontology.org/test-html.shtml
>>>>
>>>>
>>>