[go] please proof November07 newsletter

[Jennifer Deegan (nee Clark)]

Hi,

I'm not sure if I am seeing the final version yet, but the muscle 
meeting included terms in more than just the process ontology so it 
would be good if this could be taken into account. Some of our experts 
worked very hard on component terms and would be dismayed if we said in 
the newsletter that all the work had been on process. 'Two large-scale 
additions were made to the Gene Ontologies in ' works well I think.

Thanks,

Jen

Stacia Engel wrote:

> hi Rama,
> thanks for your feedback.  i have incorporated your edits.
> 
> stacia
> 
> On Nov 14, 2007, at 2:00 PM, Rama Balakrishnan wrote:
> 
>> Thanks David. In that case, may be the sentence can be changed to  just-
>>
>> Two large-scale addition of GO terms to the Biological process  
>> ontology was made.....
>>
>> Rama
>>
>>
>>
>> On Nov 14, 2007, at 1:57 PM, David Hill wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Rama,
>>>
>>> The cardio and muscle terms were only added to process.
>>>
>>> David
>>>
>>> Rama Balakrishnan wrote:
>>>
>>>> Newsletter looks very good. Nice job.
>>>>
>>>> I have couple of suggestions (take or leave)-
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Section on Cardiovascular Physiology..
>>>> -------------------------------------
>>>> 1) Change first sentence to-
>>>>
>>>> Two large-scale addition *of GO terms* were made in October 2007...
>>>>
>>>> Was the addition to all 3 ontologies or only F and P? If latter,  
>>>> may be we can even say-
>>>>
>>>>>> Two large-scale addition of GO terms to the Molecular function  
>>>>>> and Biological process ontolgies were made...
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> 2) Change the sentence about using AmiGO to:
>>>>
>>>> To see the blood pressure regulation...use the AmiGO Advanced  
>>>> Search; **type mtg_cardio or mtg_muscle in the text box on the  top 
>>>> and select 'All fields' in the 'Search Type' section.**
>>>>
>>>> Section on spsl2go
>>>> ----------------------------
>>>> Last sentence of first para-should it be 'coded' in (IEA coded)?  
>>>> can it be changed to '...electronic GO annotation (using IEA  
>>>> evidence code) in our latest...'
>>>>
>>>> Thats all.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks,
>>>>
>>>> Rama
>>>>
>>>> On Nov 14, 2007, at 1:30 PM, Stacia Engel wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi,
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks everyone for input on the November 2007 issue of the GO  
>>>>> newsletter.  We have a version that is ready for proofing by GOC  
>>>>> members.  Please have a look and let us know if we have any  
>>>>> errors, typos, etc.  We'd like to send it out by week's end.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>> Stacia & the Newsletter Team
>>>>>
>>>>> pdf -
>>>>> http://www.yeastgenome.org/~stacia/GOnewsletterNovember07.pdf
>>>>>
>>>>> html -
>>>>> http://www.geneontology.org/test-html.shtml
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>

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Jennifer Deegan (nee Clark)
EMBL-European Bioinformatics Institute
Gene Ontology Consortium