[go] please proof November07 newsletter

[Jennifer Deegan (nee Clark)]

Hi David,

No problem.:-) We had a surprisingly wide-ranging brief on the muscle 
work. :-)

Jen


David Hill wrote:

> Sorry Jen! This was my error. I didn't realize you guys worked on more 
> than just process.
>
> David
>
> Jennifer Deegan (nee Clark) wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I'm not sure if I am seeing the final version yet, but the muscle 
>> meeting included terms in more than just the process ontology so it 
>> would be good if this could be taken into account. Some of our 
>> experts worked very hard on component terms and would be dismayed if 
>> we said in the newsletter that all the work had been on process. 'Two 
>> large-scale additions were made to the Gene Ontologies in ' works 
>> well I think.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Jen
>>
>> Stacia Engel wrote:
>>
>>> hi Rama,
>>> thanks for your feedback.  i have incorporated your edits.
>>>
>>> stacia
>>>
>>> On Nov 14, 2007, at 2:00 PM, Rama Balakrishnan wrote:
>>>
>>>> Thanks David. In that case, may be the sentence can be changed to  
>>>> just-
>>>>
>>>> Two large-scale addition of GO terms to the Biological process  
>>>> ontology was made.....
>>>>
>>>> Rama
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Nov 14, 2007, at 1:57 PM, David Hill wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi Rama,
>>>>>
>>>>> The cardio and muscle terms were only added to process.
>>>>>
>>>>> David
>>>>>
>>>>> Rama Balakrishnan wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> Newsletter looks very good. Nice job.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I have couple of suggestions (take or leave)-
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Section on Cardiovascular Physiology..
>>>>>> -------------------------------------
>>>>>> 1) Change first sentence to-
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Two large-scale addition *of GO terms* were made in October 2007...
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Was the addition to all 3 ontologies or only F and P? If latter,  
>>>>>> may be we can even say-
>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Two large-scale addition of GO terms to the Molecular function  
>>>>>>>> and Biological process ontolgies were made...
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 2) Change the sentence about using AmiGO to:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> To see the blood pressure regulation...use the AmiGO Advanced  
>>>>>> Search; **type mtg_cardio or mtg_muscle in the text box on the  
>>>>>> top and select 'All fields' in the 'Search Type' section.**
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Section on spsl2go
>>>>>> ----------------------------
>>>>>> Last sentence of first para-should it be 'coded' in (IEA coded)?  
>>>>>> can it be changed to '...electronic GO annotation (using IEA  
>>>>>> evidence code) in our latest...'
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thats all.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Rama
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On Nov 14, 2007, at 1:30 PM, Stacia Engel wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Hi,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks everyone for input on the November 2007 issue of the GO  
>>>>>>> newsletter.  We have a version that is ready for proofing by 
>>>>>>> GOC  members.  Please have a look and let us know if we have 
>>>>>>> any  errors, typos, etc.  We'd like to send it out by week's end.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>> Stacia & the Newsletter Team
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> pdf -
>>>>>>> http://www.yeastgenome.org/~stacia/GOnewsletterNovember07.pdf
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> html -
>>>>>>> http://www.geneontology.org/test-html.shtml
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>
>


-- 
Jennifer Deegan nee Clark
EMBL-European Bioinformatics Institute
Gene Ontology Consortium